Example Referencing Law Essay Sample
There are countless ways to stylistically complete an academic essay. Here are some examples of how students have successfully done so, while maintaining proper academic structure.
A proper introduction should:
- Introduce main arguments
- Have an attention grabbing first sentence
- Provide concise information about broader significance of topic
- Lead in to the body of the essay
Here are three examples of introduction paragraphs. They have been re-written several times to illustrate the difference between excellent, good and poor answers. For a close reading of the examples, click the images below.
Example 1Example 2Example 3
The body of your essay should:
- Address one idea per paragraph
- Support arguments with scholarly references or evidence
- Contextualise any case studies or examples
- Use correct punctuation and proofread your work
- Keep writing impersonal (do not use 'I', 'we', 'me')
- Be concise and simple
- Be confident ("The evidence suggests..." rather than "this could be because...")
- Connect paragraphs so they flow and are logical
- Introduce primary and secondary sources appropriately
- Avoid using too many quotations or using quotes that are too long
- Do not use contractions (you’re, they’d)
- Do not use emotive language ("the horrific and extremely sad scene is evidence of...")
This example illustrates how to keep an essay succinct and focused, by taking the time to define the topic:
Defining a topic
Lastly, this paragraph illustrates how to engage with opposing arguments and refute them:
ConclusionA proper conclusion should:
- Sum up arguments
- Provide relevance to overall topic and unit themes
- Not introduce new ideas
Example 1 Example 2
Australian Guide to Legal Citation Example Essay
The uniform Evidence Act (UEA) has both substantially changed the common law and has used the common law to better the laws of evidence.1 Section 38 under the UEA ‘…concerns unfavourable witnesses will be examined’; 2 this section has replaced the common law with statutory law. This essay will focus on the recommendations of the Australian Law Reform Commission (ALRC), case law and legislation to demonstrate the effectiveness of the different approaches to the common law.
B Unfavourable Witnesses
Section 38 of the UEA made substantial changes to the common law in relation to “hostile witness”. The UEA changed the term “hostile witness” to “unfavourable witness” and abrogated the situation in which this type of witness could be cross-examined.
1 Under the Common Law
Under common law a witness can only be cross-examined by the party who has called them if the witness is “hostile”. It is a general rule that a party who calls a particular witness to give evidence may not ask that witness questions designed to discredit them.3
2 The Australian Law Reform Commission
The ALRC explained the limitations of the definition “hostile”. For example, it is rare for the court to declare a witness as hostile because the court requires something more than just unfavourable evidence. Simply stated, the higher test made it difficult in labelling a witness as “hostile”.4 The definition in turn led the law to discourage the calling of witnesses that could not be cross-examined.5
1 Evidence Act 1995 (Cth).
2 Ibid .
3 Martin Hinton and Nerissa Schwarz, ‘Practice Note: The Hostile or Unfavourable Witness’, (2008) 27, The University of Tasmania Law Review 229, 229.
4 Randall v The Queen (2004) 146 A Crim R 197
5 Hinton and Schwarz, above n 3.
The term “hostile” has been described as an “artless piece of drafting”.6 The common law provision was potentially damaging to justice in that it limited evidence that could have been significant to the case. Simpson summarises that the common law dealing with the unhelpful witness is restrictive; if the witness is not declared “hostile” or “adverse”, then counsel must generally accept the damaging evidence of the witness.7 Similarly the remedy of having a witness declared “hostile” is not easily obtained.8 Where it is not obtained the party concerned will often be left in the position of having no remedy.
The effect of s38 of the UEA demonstrates the effectiveness of evidence that would otherwise not be admitted. For example, in Randall v The Queen the Crown was obliged to call witnesses to the alleged offence, without the ability to have the witnesses declared unfavourable under s38 the Crown could not have cross-examined them, which would have had a significant, and arguable negative impact on the case.9
The case of R v Milat was also another significant case that showed the importance of s38.10 In this case the Crown was obliged to call witnesses. The Crown was then able to seek leave to cross-examine these witnesses about evidence that had been given and was unfavourable to the Crown’s case.
6 Shane Simpson, ‘The Characterisation of One’s Witnesses for the Purpose of their Impeachment (1976) 50,The Australian Law Journal 410, 412.
8 Criminal Code Act 2014 (NT); Evidence Act 1995 (Cth)
9 (2004) 146 A Crim R 197.
10 (Unreported Description, Supreme Court of New South Wales, Hunt CJ, 23 April 1996).
A Articles/ Books
Cook, Catriona et al, Laying Down the Law (Lexisnexis Orders/service, 9th ed, 2014)
Hemming, Andrew, Miiko Kumar and Elisabeth Penden, Evidence: Commentary and Materials (Lawbook Co., 8th ed, 2013)
Hinton, Martin and Nerissa Schwarz, ‘Practice Note: The Hostile or Unfavourable Witness’, (2008) 27, The University of Tasmania Law Review 229
McEwan, Alexander, ‘The Rule in Brown v Dunn in Australian Criminal Law: MWJ v R and R v Map’, (2006), 13, James Cook University Law Review, 155
Simpson, Shane, ‘The Characterisation of One’s Witnesses for the Purpose of their Impeachment (1976) 50,The Australian Law Journal 410
B Case Law
Adam v The Queen (2001) 207 CLR 96
Browne v Dunn (1893) 6 R 67
R v Ashton, Farmer and Randall  TASSC 140 (4 December 2003)
R v Milat (Unreported Description, Supreme Court of New South Wales, Hunt CJ, 23 April 1996)
Randall v The Queen (2004) 146 A Crim R 197
Criminal Code Act 2014 (NT)
Evidence Act 1995 (Cth)
D Other Sources
Australian Law Reform Commission, Australian Government, Uniform Evidence Law (30 July 2012) <http://www.alrc.gov.au/inquiries/uniform-evidence-law>
Australian Law Reform Commission, Evidence (Interim), Report No 26 (1985)
Wroe, David and Rachel Olding, ‘Jihadist Fears Spark Review of Evidence Laws’ The Sydney Morning Herald (Sydney), 1 July 2014